After finishing our rough edit, i realized that there isn't a clear sense of entrapment straight away, because out of the people that i showed the sequence to, many didn't realize that the man was chained until he began to hack at the chains with the rock, but this is near the end.
We are going to attempt to re edit the sequence, adding more shots of the chain in, and possibly some more effects to the text, maybe even deleting the text, because at the moment it is too small, and stays on the screen for too long.
However, there are many good points about the rough edit.
There are lots of perfect matches on action, and this is always good for picking up marks. The beginning establishing shots are useful because they provide a feeling of loneliness.
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