After asking 17 people what they thought of the original film sequence, we had a few negative responses about the beginning of the sequence, the main thing that bothered 14 of the 17 was that although the character is chained, and this is shown later, at the beginning it is not entirely clear that the character is actually chained. We took note of this and re-shot an extra two shots of the chain, close up, and this made the audience more aware of the situation our character finds himself in.
The next problem was easier to solve.
All 17 of the people we asked said that they couldn't quite make out the titles, due to the size, font and the colour of the text. We changed the text from red to white, changed the text to one more visible, and made the text bigger, with more of a time span across the screen.
We asked 15 of the original 17 to watch it again, and they all approved of the changes and rated the clip positively.
Here is the final version of our Media Coursework Practical.
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