The research is better than it was but is still a little on the basic side. I have put comments on your posts to help you develop them further. Qasim - your posts are very limited in what they cover - they could and should do so much more. Tom - you need to do your main research posts. Jamie - again, they are basic and could be worked up a little more. Please make sure you attend to this over the Christmas break. One big omission is that you have no post identifying your target audience and no research into their tastes.
Not sure about the quote under your blogger header - I quite like it but you may want to lose it before it gets sent to the examiners - not sure how they would view it!
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